Just For A Kiss…

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Just For A Kiss…

(A Mini Story)

 A Mini Story by Sandeep Aikkara written in Malayalam

Translated by Philip V Ariel

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Yes, he was not a Man prostitute…

​But still he bargained for a kiss!

“No, this much amount we can’t give you!”

 They firmly said!

“No, don’t say it like that, I may not be able to continue my job hereafter!”

​“If I do this, sometimes I may even go into deep poverty!”

“You must give the money I asked for!”

Oh, this much money just for a kiss?

 There was no other way, but they agreed!

Everything went according to his plan.

That Kiss, in fact, for them is a priceless one!

A​t last they succumbed to his demand.

“When?”

“Now!”

“No!”

​“Not now!​”

After supper come to the front courtyard,  just outside the dinning hall.

“Money?!”

“Not now, not because we don’t believe you, but at present we don’t have it!”

Gently rubbing his beard, he said

“Give me the money in the night itself.”​

He is not a man prostitute…

But, still he may be the first person who  charged such a huge price just for a kiss.

He just counted the money in the moonlight.

Yes, exactly the full amount.

Thirty pieces of silver!!!

The Price Of A Kiss!

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You can read the original post in Malayalam HERE

The original post published in Irippidam Weekly

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Sandeep Aikkara

Sandeep is an upcoming young writer from Amballoor, Trichur, Kerala.

He is presently working as an Assistant Director for an upcoming Malayalam film.

Earlier he worked as an Assistant Director for few Malayalam serials, and

also worked as a personality development trainer for some time.

He can be reached by Tel: +91 9526227472  or thru his facebook link:  Facebook

 

 

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A Multilingual Freelance Writer, Editor, Blogger, Roundup Expert, Translator, Internet Marketer And A Social Campaigner. Manages different sites in English as well as in Malayalam. Born And Brought Up In Kerala. Now Based At Hyderabad, Telangana, India. Facebook or Can Reach At: philipscom55(@)Gmail [.] Com twitter: @PVAriel Skype Philva6

16 thoughts on “Just For A Kiss…

  1. Hi Brother Ariel,

    Thanks for introducing one writer from God’s own country.

    Hi sandeep,
    You made an interesting twist to the short story. In the beginning reader’s don’t get an idea of what you are mentioning there. Hoping to see more and more good works from Sandeep soon.

    Regards

    Reji Stephenson

    1. Hi Reji,
      Thanks a lot for your valuable time and the insightful feedback.
      Yes, in the beginning, surely the readers will think the writer is going to tell yet another love story, :-) but only in the concluding part the readers will get the clear picture. :-)
      Though it’s a mini story that is the ability of the writer to pull on his readers to stay on the page to read the full story. :-)
      Sandeep did that wonderfully in this story.
      Thanks again for dropping by.
      Have Happy weekend
      Regards
      ~ Philip

  2. Hello Philip, Nice to see you here again my friend! Now this piece is an interesting read for sure. Sandeep did quite a job with the price for a kiss.

    Thanks for sharing
    Chery :))

  3. Nice one Sandeep!
    Nice to read this poem, article or whatever it is,
    but this is something really interesting and sexy too!! :-)
    I enjoyed this one! :-)
    Have a nice day both of you Philip Sir and Sandeep
    Vashishtha

  4. Philip,
    This is very interesting, he had to go that far just for a kiss. :-)
    Nice mini story.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Best Regards

  5. Hi Philip,

    This is a very interesting one post!

    An age old story, the author created into a wonderful mini story.
    I like the way in which he presented it.

    Nice that you brought it here in the English language. Thanks Philip.

  6. Its refreshing to read this mini story. Its also interesting. Hopefully, we will get to see more of these stories to douse the stress reading and writing about Internet marketing! :D

  7. Hi Phillip,
    That was a nice short story. In the beginning I was a bit confused but getting towards the end I realized that it was a twist to the story of thirty pieces of silver. High Price for a Kiss.
    All the best
    Vinton

  8. Hi Philip,

    You have translated quite a deep story. On the surface, the story appears quite superficial but when it takes an unexpected turn, I had to respect the literary genius of the writer.

    Nice work you’ve done with the translation… though I do not understand the original language, I can clearly see that the English here flows perfectly.

    Do enjoy the day.

    Always,
    Akaahan Terungwa

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